| An autobiographical outlook on one of the most flamboyant discoveries of my life. |
| An autobiographical outlook on one of the most flamboyant discoveries of my life. |
| Name: Mike Wyatt Age: 18 Sex: Male (rough estimate) Species: Hume Origin: England Hometown: Blandford St. Mary Occupation: Student Art Style: Fantasy Author (attempting) Manga Artist (attempting) Photographer (failed) Other Skills: Performance Student Black Belt Martial Artist World Champion Procrastinator International League Apple Devourer Reason to get up in the morning: My Friends (...and my reflection) |
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I'm thinking of rewriting Feng's Fall of Hodal thingy actually, any advice?
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Hyperventalation City!
Not really =/
I was just reading it again, and I thought it deserved a fav.
I'd say to try not to dwell on your past stuff much. If you want to tell the story differently, or change a few facts, then why not try telling it from someone else's point of view.
Maybe from Keasaki so you can define his character. Or if you still want Feng's point of view, then maybe from Phoenix's mum's POV.
Just some ideas.
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I might try those in a rewrite, or in a different fic.
Poor Keisaki and Aeda do need to...y'know...exist >_>
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Hyperventalation City!
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Hyperventalation City!
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Hyperventalation City!
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